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A rewrite
I've spent quite a bit of time thinking over this and well I've made up my mind. 

I'm going to rewrite my OC Selipa's story from the start, I just feel that with my improvement in drawing and better ideas her story can be delivered far better. I'll leave it in the gallery whilst I redraw it image by image but some elements I'll keep the same.

For example things which WON'T change include:

- Selipa herself and her being an LSSJ (yes I know we have 'Kale' in DBS now but my Selipa isn't a humongous Broly, in fact the picture above shows what my original vision for Selipa in LSSJ would have been: simply a step up from normal SSJ but with recharging Ki and pupils visible which I have used in the story but only from the middle onward).
 
- The 5 kids who, according to my story are 5 Saiyans from the past revived as children without the memories of the past whom Selipa raises on Earth (4 are from canon and the 5th is another OC of mine based on a character seen in the Bardock film)

- Zangya and her role in Selipa's story

- Some story elements like Cooler, Bojack, Janemba etc who Selipa faces although I plan on changing some of the plot regarding how and when she faces them


Now some things which WILL change include:

- I'm going to remove Trunks', Cell's and Broly's appearances in Selipa's story.

In 2015 when I decided to put a different version of Future Trunks who winds up in Selipa's timeline I did so because I wanted to see more Future Trunks but after the Goku Black saga in DBS I reopened Selipa's gallery and decided that I do not need to include Trunks in her story since we got our fill of him in DBS. 

I'll remove the Cell Saga in Selipa's story because I feel it's redundant. Cell in Selipa's story makes little sense and is unneeded so I'll remove him and do something different with this part of history in my story. 

Broly, well, I'm removing him from the story because I shouldn't have placed him in the first place, I was too caught up with the films that I just had to do a Broly in Selipa's story back in 2015, now I'll replace that plot with something else too.

- I'll be redoing the Majin Buu saga in Selipa's story starting from maybe retconning the whole 'Selipa goes to school etc' arc which just feels far too close to canon, in fact I did this part just about 2 years ago back in 2015.

- Character powers will change too, notably I plan on giving Zangya far more love than before.

- Times when Selipa first ascends to different transformations will change.

In my original story Selipa first goes SSJ when 17 and 18 nearly killed her and her friends, she then goes LSSJ first against Broly then LSSJ3 first against Janemba and finally SSJG via her 5 kids against Beerus. I'll change some if not all of this, I've already decided where to make Selipa first go SSJ and that is against Mecha Frieza and King Cold who return for vengeance much like in canon (in the original story of mine this is where I make Trunks appear but remember that he will be removed from the plot).


- Selipa traveling back to Future Trunks' timeline to assist him against the Androids and Cell.

This was fun to draw back in 2015 because it was cool and interesting buuuuut I guess DBS did it too in the Goku Black Saga (not with Cell or the Androids but it's still the same thing)  so the novelty wore off for me and I'm erasing this whole segment from Selipa's story.

So yeah 2015/16 was a great 2 years of uploading my OC's story but looking back now there are just so many things I can do over better. It will take a long time to overwrite all the work I've done but I feel that it's for the best ESPECIALLY considering all the things popping up in DBS nowadays.

Oh and as for the image above well that is an example of change in my story: it's Selipa in LSSJ form around post- Buu Saga in her timeline but now with Zangya to the right having her own unique transformation which I call Divine Hera Zangya.

It's basically her racial version of acquiring God Mode (the details as to how she acquires it will come later).

So in DH Mode my Zangya here far outclasses even LSSJ3 Selipa and surpasses Super Saiyan God Selipa as well.
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Okay now this is just funny.

First I make up my 'Selipa' character who is an LSSJ, I made her back in 2015.

Then in 2015 too I decided on her father whose name is Renso (from the word Horenso)

Now in 2017 there's a female LSSJ named Kale in DBS and a Saiyan named Renso...

I almost don't feel like carrying on anymore because the originality feels gone, before it was just Selipa's name that was akin to a character in the anime now it's both her being a female lssj and Renso being in DBS.

Thing is I fear that others may think my Selipa and her father whose name is Renso may be copied off DBS but I made it up back in 2015.

Or maybe I'm just overthinking and overreacting here.

I dunno
So in forgetting how weak my level 5 Selipa was in DBXV2 I went online and joined a parallel quest.

I used Rose Black Goku because his stats are better than Selipa's but the Quest was a high level one.

Basically I was this puny level 5 character pulling of crazy (but little damage) 80 hit combos lol at least I managed to kill 2 opponents before getting owned by level 80s.
Soooo only now have I finally obtained a legit copy of Dragonball Xenoverse 2 Deluxe Edition on Steam... excellent BUT this means ALL the hard work I did on my uhm 'downloaded' version was for nothing and now I'm starting from scratch....  
I've finished 2 sketches in Selipa's gallery now and they're about the time she fights Frieza on Namek. The redrawn pics are not posted yet but when I compare them to the ones I did back in 2015 the difference is staggering. As soon as I finish more I'll upload the new ones (they'll overwrite the old pics). 
Okay now this is just funny.

First I make up my 'Selipa' character who is an LSSJ, I made her back in 2015.

Then in 2015 too I decided on her father whose name is Renso (from the word Horenso)

Now in 2017 there's a female LSSJ named Kale in DBS and a Saiyan named Renso...

I almost don't feel like carrying on anymore because the originality feels gone, before it was just Selipa's name that was akin to a character in the anime now it's both her being a female lssj and Renso being in DBS.

Thing is I fear that others may think my Selipa and her father whose name is Renso may be copied off DBS but I made it up back in 2015.

Or maybe I'm just overthinking and overreacting here.

I dunno

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N7warrior007 Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Had a interesting thought.

What is a angel went rogue? Angels are more powerful than their gods of destruction so defeating a angle may only take another angel that's stronger but what if the strongest one went rogue? What if the grand priest went rogue?
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Vegito65 Featured By Owner May 25, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well I haven't really been following Super for quite some time so I'm not familiar with any of this. I like DBS but now they keep adding more and more stuff in too short a time so yeah I can't answer this.
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N7warrior007 Featured By Owner May 26, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I guess. Yeah but it's kinda interesting to think about. Most powerful beings in each universe. If one turns then the universe is screwed

Also manga Zamasu can make janemba portals and trunks for some reason can now heal people
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Vegito65 Featured By Owner May 26, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well Goku healed a bird in Revenge of Cooler so I guess healing is not out of lore
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N7warrior007 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Well finished playthrough 1 of andromida is it as bad as critics say? na i don't think so. there is some sjw but its not main part of the story and is easily avoided. Biggest thing is prety much everyone and anyone is romanceable making everyone lgbt. thats the problem say 11 million of each race. out of those few are actually out of stasis out of that you meet a handful the fact that they'd all be lgbt is statitically impossible

plot wise its ok the kett are basically colectors and reapers rolled into one in looks, enemy types and beliefs. Kett basically believe they're superior and all races should be one bla bla bla they basically have a sirum that turns anyone into kett like reapers do to people.

i guess in ways it makes sence if life runs in cycles mabe galixies do but its doesn't seem intentional,

gameplay wise its more fun than any in the trilogy with the improved movent and avading and jumping through the jetpack. Its more fun and allows more stratagy. as is multi player

biggest issue is the animations that can be wonkey and weird

but i don't blame them buisness wise if a progect doesn't do well the next one doesn't get as much. I think they had less budgit, it kinda shows

the game has good moments and bad. its a mixed bag. you can definitly go into it without any need of playing the first three for the most part.

is it better than the trillogy? no not really but its ending was actually done better

for one it does actually feel like all your choices till them made a impact. when all your allies come to help it truly made all that effort and time seem worth while so its kinda funny the game critics hate i feel is the one with the best climax of the 4. 

again biggest issue is animations and human models which they've began to patch. 

honestly id give it a 6-7 out of 10 for it. gameplay s fun, sjw crap is avoidable or just meh over. Multiplayer is fu, harder than three which i like feels more team stratogy is needed which i like more. 

I would playagain if there a ng+ option
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Vegito65 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well that's good to hear. Me? I won't be getting it because it's pricey, 50gb download and sorry to say but the human Crewmembers (I usually only romance humans) look too ugly for my taste (females I only romance in games). I'm glad to hear you've enjoyed it but I think my Mass Effect journey ends with 3.
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N7warrior007 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
It's honestly not as bad as trailers made it and they did a "graphics update" which slightly improved them. Character wise they're good
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Vegito65 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know it's not so bad but this game just puts me off. It doesn't 'feel' right to me and I just cannot play it. Perhaps it's attachment to the trilogy and its cast but I refuse to move on. Not into Andromeda.
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N7warrior007 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Well fuck. I think they're under the floorboards now. Yay...
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N7warrior007 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
oh and its a game breaking bug too yay...
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